Slightly Suggestive Pose

[kirstenmary]

These are new photos of Dawn, a good friend of mine. She just lost a lot of weight, and she wanted some photos to give to her boyfriend. What do you think? How could I have made them better? This is my first "shot" at this.

Thanks!!!!

[ukexpat]

These look pretty good to me -- I guess it all depends on what you are trying to capture and what Dawn wants to show her boyfriend!!

[kirstenmary]

These look pretty good to me -- I guess it all depends on what you are trying to capture and what Dawn wants to show her boyfriend!!

I guess we wanted tomake her look as pretty as possible, kwim?
How about these?

[bigbad]

i like the second set better. the lighting seems a little less harsh. though i do like the very first one.

overall maybe a little dark for my tastes, but it does set a mood. i would just suggest maybe dimming the flash (or lights) a bit or bouncing them off something as she gets some sort of shiny highlights on the second photo of the first post.