New nude/figure gallery

[knighty]

http://www.pbase.com/knighty/claire_4

I'd love some feedback!
Cheers,
Knighty

[neovolatile]

Thanks for sharing those with us. Keep working. You might want to look at something like
Digital Nude Photography by Roderick Macdonald
The Nude (Creative Photography Workshop) by Bruce Pinkard

I think your focus is good, your composition looks okay, your lighting may need some more experimentation. Just my opinion.

Again, thanks and keep sharing here.

Sincerely,
Ellsworth Weaver
http://www.pbase.com/neovolatile

[knighty]

Ellsworth,
Thankyou for your comments both here and in the gallery. I've worked with Claire 4 times now and each time has been an experimentation time and each time I've got better images so hopefully I can learn from this shoot also and go better next time!
Thanks again,
Knighty

[s9810588]

Ian, your photos look badly underexposed on my monitor except for 057 and 060. Probably caused by different monitor calibration but I think my monitor is alright.

I also agree with Ellsworth about the lighting. Also, rather than having pitch black background, include something but keep it simple.

Cheers from another Aussie.
Kris

[knighty]

Hey Kris,
Thanks for your comments also! I agree that on this moniter the shots look underexposed too, but on the computer I edited these on they are spot on, and that moniter is calibrated fairly closely to the people that print my stuff for me. What are some possible alternatives for backgrounds? Personally I like the plain black but all of this is experimenting so I'll give anything a go!

Knighty