Wed Dec 15, 2004 4:27 am
I also like the 2nd one the most but i also think improvements can be made in either shots begining with the tree in the background. As far as the 1st image goes...too green. for "professsional' images i know what you mean but they mostly tend to be on the Cyan/blue scale where your image is just straight up green...it looks like a digital alteration to me.(im also a film geek so dont mind me). The 2nd image is certainly an improvement as far as the model goes(less twist in the mid area body and the mouth is not as strained,it looks bunchy). My advice would be to reshoot it if you can and think about the background area(the tree and the wire intersecting her head were the 1st things i noticed when looking).
If you want to play with the tones try filters or try and place the cooler tones where appropriate. if they seem to be just random tonal changes then they wont be as eye popping or have as mush meaning behind it. for instance, fool around with color contrast..the 1st image the background is green and so is the model. in the 2nd photo the background is green but the model is warmer toned..it creates a sense of depth in the photo, where as previously they just mesh together and create less interest. experiment with backgrounds that have different tonal/color ranges and contrasts. just keep color theory in mind because it can work even in basic model shots.
just my personal opinion an all.
-a
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