Pictures from 1st wedding shoot

[mgoderre]

I just finished my first wedding as the official wedding photographer Im not a professional by any means. I did the wedding for a co-workers sister for a very small fee. I used my D70 with the 18-70 lens and a SB-800. Here is a link to the pictures. Im looking to get some constructive criticism and feedback on the images. If you have time and want to look at all the images and make comments that would be great! Thanks

http://www.pbase.com/mgoderre/lorettas_wedding

[ukexpat]

I just finished my first wedding as the official wedding photographer Im not a professional by any means. I did the wedding for a co-workers sister for a very small fee. I used my D70 with the 18-70 lens and a SB-800. Here is a link to the pictures. Im looking to get some constructive criticism and feedback on the images. If you have time and want to look at all the images and make comments that would be great! Thanks

http://www.pbase.com/mgoderre/lorettas_wedding

My only comment on a quick look is with respect to fill-in flash. I see from the available EXIF info that you used flash for some shots, but EXIF info was not showing for some others, so could not tell whether you used it for others -- certainly where there are strong shadows out of doors you should use fill-in flash.