Please can someone look at my gallery and gie some advice...

[jjames]

http://www.pbase.com/jjames

[luckytrev]

You have to develop your own style. If you like it, it's a good shot. Not everyone is going to like what you do, but hell, you ain't gonna like everything they do either.
If you're taking photos for fun, then just enjoy it. If you're taking pictures for money then good luck, there's not many that can make their fortune that way.
By the way I like your pictures, they show London well, keep going mate.

P.S. I left this comment on your gallery too.