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ncbrit
 
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I would appreciate some critiques please

Post Thu Jul 29, 2004 10:36 pm


I have a number of galleries at http://www.pbase.com/ncbrit please take a look and offer any critiques you think will be of value.

Thanks.

artandrevolution
 
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Post Thu Jul 29, 2004 11:10 pm


I took a look at your galleries and there were several i like alot. specifically one labeled "tree"(the 2nd one) and "bs4" under Misc. I think that your galleries could be cleaned up a bit...for instance in the Mill Village there looks to be several photos of the same building in different angles...I personally would choose just your favorite ones and edit out a few that may not work as well. the two pics i mentioned above I almost think could work well in the same gallery...you can even make subgalleries and such to combine your airplane pics but separate them by event.
Also the fireworks gallery is a little overwhelming for the same subject...i'd probably edit some of those down too and maybe combine them with photos from that event that arent the actual fireworks but of people from that day etc.
I dunno...thats just a few thing i could think of. generally things I am working on in my own galleries(compressing, editing etc)
good luck!
"The role of the revolutionary artist is to make revolution irresistable"

kigara
 
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Post Thu Jul 29, 2004 11:54 pm


they're all look fine to me, but i'm missing a sense of 'depth' on ur pics, not for the pcs itself, more in the subject...try to build the '"art of seeing" and get involved in your subject thouroughly...it'd help to give the lookers that sense of depthness... :D

ncbrit
 
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Post Sat Jul 31, 2004 2:11 pm


Thanks for the help.

ilanphoto
 
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Post Sat Jul 31, 2004 4:39 pm


posted one
by the way some galleries I liked alot
Ilan


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